Within the genres of harem seeking, Op, wish fulfillment, and "heroines can hear the inner voice" this is a well written and fun story. (I rate stories compared to other similar stories.)

The characters, while not deep or complex, are fairly true to the source material so far. The story is moving fast without getting bogged down in details that we have all read before (Sometimes many times depending on how much fan fiction you have read). The author is wisely not trying to basically re-post the entire One Piece with some details changed as many fan-fics do.

This is likely not the author's original language as they do have some issues with the he/she and his/hers of English. I have not removed a star for this though as such issues are common to many stories and authors and I feel the fact that they are willing to write good stories in my own language deserves overlooking these minor flaws.

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